Love the audio cues (the man crying sound effect is brilliant). I also appreciate the content warnings at the beginning. Very well produced. I received the good ending first, but then checked out the streaking ending. Love a story with true consequences, haha. Clean, efficient writing as well. I'll have to borrow your idea of having a google form linked at the end.
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Thanks! I think pacing and efficiency in writing is something that I've really managed to improve on over the last year or so.
And honestly yeah, go for it! It's been really interesting to see responses, for example no one has had the "Knock thief out" ending, which is good as it's the one that breaks the theme a bit too much. Going to see if I can use a database to store the data automatically in the near future,