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Hello, Aciara, and thank you for taking the time to leave feedback.

I am sorry to hear you did not enjoy the game. I appreciate you letting me know that you felt the relationships (or perhaps the emotions described in them) were too shallow and rushed.

It is difficult for me to respond to that since, if it was something I felt as well, I would have re-written the game, but it is certainly something I can keep an eye on in future.

Of course, it is hard not to take such criticism heavily, but that does not mean it should be avoided.

I hope you can find our future titles more to your liking, though if this matter comes down to my writing style then I worry that you probably won't.

Many thanks for the feedback

Blackcross & Taylor

I'm sorry that I may sounded harsher than I intended to. Sometimes it's rather difficult to express my toughts in English since it is not my native language.

It's not that I didn't enjoyed the game and your writing style! I really liked the events and how you described them and had fun reading. There was just missing something for me to feel deeper in the story and for the characters. But I like them nevertheless and really admired the diversity of personality!

And since I like your ideas and your writing style, I'm really looking forward to Heaven's Grave. :)

Don't worry, I don't think you sounded harsh . 

I meant more that my writing style tends to lean on the more understated side and that may come across as flat to some readers. 

I'm glad you enjoyed some aspects of the game, even if there were other parts that left you with the feeling that something was missing. 

Perhaps you will enjoy Heaven's Grave more - if nothing else, the story is of a much large scope.