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I'm sorry that I may sounded harsher than I intended to. Sometimes it's rather difficult to express my toughts in English since it is not my native language.

It's not that I didn't enjoyed the game and your writing style! I really liked the events and how you described them and had fun reading. There was just missing something for me to feel deeper in the story and for the characters. But I like them nevertheless and really admired the diversity of personality!

And since I like your ideas and your writing style, I'm really looking forward to Heaven's Grave. :)

Don't worry, I don't think you sounded harsh . 

I meant more that my writing style tends to lean on the more understated side and that may come across as flat to some readers. 

I'm glad you enjoyed some aspects of the game, even if there were other parts that left you with the feeling that something was missing. 

Perhaps you will enjoy Heaven's Grave more - if nothing else, the story is of a much large scope.