Couldn't resist checking out something described as a "Kafkaesque dungeon crawl"! I love the theme and I'm impressed by how much you're able to pack into such a tight space. I also really appreciate that it focuses more on the story of the dungeon and the party's traversal through it; of course, that's probably the better thing to focus on for a short jam.

Feels like a classic adventure that might have shown up in one of the old D&D magazines. My only complaint is that the red-and-white on black is a little hard to read...but maybe that's appropriate for the setting!

It looks like an awesome one session adventure that you could slot into any campaign (especially a hell based one) near or at the start. The adventure would work very well for a party that's focused on asking questions and exploring. Though, on the other hand I would be hesitant to run this if I know my players would be a "punch first, ask questions later" type of group. 

This tiny pamphlet opens with a fun premise and unique hook. What follows is a short, solid, easy to read dungeon with plenty of evocative detail. If we roleplayers ever decide on a shared definition of the term 'dungeon', I hope great modules like this one will be cited as textbook examples!

(And yes, this is the third time I've typed this out. I'm fairly new to itch and I'm not entirely sure what the best place for this kind of feedback is...)

I love the idea of the module and the aesthetic but what system is it for, how do you play it?

The scenario you set up sounds great from a 'running the game' perspective; you provide the right amount of pertinent info in that regard! The one thing I'd see if I could squeeze in is what game system the module is for (OSR I would guess but am not involved in that scene so I don't know), though I suspect the people who know, know. Cool module :-]!