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Ah thank you again for all of the feedback notes!  Don't worry about being nitpicky, I really appreciate the level of detail of what you have found.  I can't promise that I will fix everything perfectly, but I would rather consider as many places for improvement as possible.  It's rare for me to get this kind of bug testing!  I will definitely see what I can do to address these issues for the next update!  Also I don't mind you posting here or emailing me.  which ever is easier for you! <3 Thanks again so much!

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I almost forgot ! Thanks for the food, I'll always be here to gob some more !

I may not be productive but I sure gob a lot of stories and I always wanted to be of use to one of them authors I like~ (but most seem too preocupied looking serious and professional - or they maaay have other things to do - anyway it's not that easy to give a hand if it's not monetary :<). 

I'm the one thanking you, you are one of the kind ^^

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I went ahead and made the script changes based on your suggestions and it only took me 20 minutes.  I believe these small changes will help the flow of text in the places that you pointed out and hopefully contribute to a more immersive experience overall.  I get too stuck in my own head when I creating this stuff so I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts.  I'm doing this to connect with others through my characters and stories so even if my replies can be slow at times, I am always super appreciative of anyone who gives me a bit of their time.  There's lots to do on the internet, so that you chose to spend some time here means a lot to me *^_^*