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Hey !

I cramed the "day 1". Here is my bug review :

- Got a crash snooping at Noctisse's writing desk at the end of the day : "journal_day is not defined line 154 in noctisse_bed.py" (also "ignore" make me pick the drawer's key I already had in my inventory :<).

...The reste is frankly silly details i found you might want to ignore :
- Got hungy in my day (quest), then got back to bed, tried lay doing nothing and got her saying "what if i get hungry ?" : well I am, I've even the quest to show for it !
- I dressed, got back to my room, undressed. Ilyon arrives. Me "I can't say that I was just too lazy to get dressed" : well I dressed twice !
- When going around the potty searching for stuff to do, it ends with "Ngh - I'm done !" but the quest "bowel" doesn't update (I assume it's normal but the sentence is a bit misleading there).
- I waited at the door of the house at 11h. Illyon surprises me. Weird, I was waiting for him. But funnier, after we talk, I still wait for someone at the door 2h more before surrending my wait !
- I ate my tuber (or tea), gone back to the kitchen. Saw the option "I already have something to eat". Well I have eaten already so !

Too much nitpicking maybe ? ^^'
If you want only more crucial stuff just say so, I can refrain the extreme "let's make weird moves see what doesn't work perfectly". Also mail is prefered or is okay here ?


(Also I wonder what will happen to my hot tea in my inventory on day2 since I couldn't consume both meal and drink ~ - Weeell. It's still here.)


On day2 :
- First thing in the morning I get into Ilyon room, get thrown off and last sentence is "(It's early. There's a high chance he's still in his room or close by.)" Dah, jut got thrown out !
- I guess the favorability quest with ilyon can't be achieved with ilyon yet

...Not much to report about day2, didn't saw anything to nitpick x)
There is a hudge number of variable, I think it's gonna be funny to see how much miscalenous object one can finish the game with :o

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Ah thank you again for all of the feedback notes!  Don't worry about being nitpicky, I really appreciate the level of detail of what you have found.  I can't promise that I will fix everything perfectly, but I would rather consider as many places for improvement as possible.  It's rare for me to get this kind of bug testing!  I will definitely see what I can do to address these issues for the next update!  Also I don't mind you posting here or emailing me.  which ever is easier for you! <3 Thanks again so much!

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I almost forgot ! Thanks for the food, I'll always be here to gob some more !

I may not be productive but I sure gob a lot of stories and I always wanted to be of use to one of them authors I like~ (but most seem too preocupied looking serious and professional - or they maaay have other things to do - anyway it's not that easy to give a hand if it's not monetary :<). 

I'm the one thanking you, you are one of the kind ^^

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I went ahead and made the script changes based on your suggestions and it only took me 20 minutes.  I believe these small changes will help the flow of text in the places that you pointed out and hopefully contribute to a more immersive experience overall.  I get too stuck in my own head when I creating this stuff so I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts.  I'm doing this to connect with others through my characters and stories so even if my replies can be slow at times, I am always super appreciative of anyone who gives me a bit of their time.  There's lots to do on the internet, so that you chose to spend some time here means a lot to me *^_^*