This is a great entry! You've made great use of the theme.

An interesting point to be made in the free will debate concerns the fact that our freedoms are already restricted pretty significantly by our circumstances. For example, by not having oatmeal in my pantry I can't have oatmeal for breakfast.

*Slams table* This was what i was talking about! Loved the 4th wall break, I think the best way to make a game about free will is doing the game aware of himself.

The music is simple yet it helps to the atmosphere, I found some minor grammatical mistakes too.

The narrative is well written, that feel of "something's wrong" is well transmitted to the player.

Good game, I enjoyed a lot playing it!!

It's a neat idea, a CYOA game where you don't have a choice (or do you?) is an idea I considered as well. I did find an annoying technical issue where if I focused out of the window (alt-tab or whatever) it resized the window to an improper size and didn't let me control it anymore, so I had to restart it a few times. There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes as well, which is unfortunate in an entirely text-based game. But I enjoyed going through the minutiae of daily life and the slowly increasing feeling of something being wrong. Nice work!