You managed to pack so much narrative into a short story in 48 hours. Very good job! I bonded with Colt and Max already and now I'm sad the game's over. The note-taking was cool, I feel like it wasn't 100% necessary at this point but if you expand the game in the future it'll be very useful. It adds a sense of realism to the game too. Basically, my only gripes are that it isn't long enough ;)