Hey, thanks for the feedback! To clarify, the crust isn't 1 km thick - that's the approximate distance from the interior's surface to the ceiling above.
Curious if you could clarify what was unclear around the Crumbling Effects?
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The 5-8 result reads like it hits only #5 "The Temple", but I think it's meant to hit the location corresponding to the result? (1-4 is worded that way). Do the Crumbling Effects AND the Body Save happen on 5-8 if the crew are there?
My bad on the crust! I think I am having trouble with that sentence.
Fair enough! Appreciate the clarity, and that you enjoyed the concept/layout. I agree with the art on the center panel if page two - that was a last minute change that I almost instantly regretted.
A lot of this was an experiment on my part as to how minimalistic I could make an adventure and still have it be, well, a usable adventure, so there's definitely some rough corners.