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Thank you for the feedback. I agree with everything you said. It is a bit too dense, especially when I look at other people's submissions. They are all really clean and easily scannable. Mine is a little bit too much. This is the first time I designed one of these and working with such a format was interesting, but I need more practice to make sure I can adjust the scope of my ideas for the required task. As for the art, you are right. I'm not really a skilled artist. I did a few board game prototypes and things like that, but I always relied on people helping me with art or just grabbing stock images. But I decided to use this jam as an opportunity to try to expand as an artist and try to do some of it on my own. And I know it is a bit amateurish, compared to what I feel more comfortable with, such as charts, rules, and things like that. Thanks again for the feedback.

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To be clear, you did a great job. The keying is well thought out and clever,  it’s just dense.

Your art is good. I really like the art for the masked people (I’m not looking at the module right now, so I forget what they’re called). 

I hope you continue making modules.