I really like the idea of this game. It is clever. It is a nice reminder to take time for your self even at work. Every day I always try to find something fun to do. Sometimes I read children's books (we have a whole wrack of them). I just appreciate you spreading the message our jobs don't own our souls and we should have fun at work even if it something as simple and silly as pretending to be a spy.

This is clever! I love the language you use throughout, your layout is super clean and fitting, and so is the art. The idea of actually physically interacting with things at work and using points you gained from other things to inevitably win is really clever. And it’s (unless I’m misunderstanding) really cool that you’re basically doing the exact opposite of what you’re doing in the game, and yet it has the same outcome: you’re (potentially) doing something you shouldn’t. I’ve never had a job in an office, but people sure pay attention to your bathroom breaks or when you’re away from your department in retail work, so running off to the break room fridge or bathroom or something would be suspicious, and those are what gain you points and eventually win this game.

The way you encourage not working as a substitute for hacking, stealing, and/or deleting data, or whatever else, is REALLY clever and a perfect balance of real life vs fantasy.

- ✨Beth

This game is so clever and so playful , it encourages you to see yourself and ordinary places in your life with new eyes.  It's a cool way to look at the theme as well, thinking about "not supposed to be here" in familiar and mundane places. 

How incredibly creative! I really like the incorporation of real life locations, and the way it encourages you to play pretend to make an otherwise boring workday more fun. The game is easy to understand, and I really like the visual design, too. I definitely think this could be built out into something a lot bigger, it's got a lot of potential!

This is clever and has inspired a few notes for a break time rpg idea for me too. 

I could see a little gadget shop purchase table being an interesting addition to this. You could spend varying amounts of points for items that have different uses.  Like: Clipboard with inventory sheet -3 points (looks legit). Cat video on Youtube pulled up on your phone -1 point (this might or might not be too convincing, roll for success)… etc. but I also like how you’ve left it to the player because they can put as much or little imagination into that as they want. Ok -3 points “ a gadget saved me” or -3 points, I used specific thing that caused specific reaction, wooo that was a close one. 

Great job on the layout and illustrations as well. This is a neat little breaktime side quest with rules that are easy to remember so you can play anywhere.

~Angel