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Thank you.  I love the cover too. <3 Your compliments mean a lot to me. I know it is cliche but I do work better under pressure. I tend to procrastinate and lighting a fire under my own butt is the best way for me to get most things done. It can backfire.  You, as usual, are right about the verbs. One of the reasons I like entering your jams so much is the feedback you and Angel give it is always helpful. I will be sure to update the list of verbs. :)

Thank you. I appreciate you kind words.

Thank you. It hurts my heart too. <z3

Thank you. :) I have spent a lot of time in the narrative side of game design. My top priority was making a game that could tell a wide range of stories.

I only played one game, but my first impression was I am going to need to play this game more. I did so badly XP. In hind sight my bad choices were obvious. Mountains are way more useful than I first thought. The art is amazing and I love the theme. It is an all around impressive game, and exactly as awesome as I was expecting. I don't know how you made so many maps in so little time. I know they are not that different, but it is still impressive. This is the most innovative roll and write I have seen since Cartographers. My next journal entry will be about my escape.

I like the writing. It has a really cool concept. I am not a huge fan of combat in TTRPGs. My favorite is Mausritter. It is my impression your system has a focus on combat. Your examples mostly involve combat which is fine. I am just letting you know this was not made for me.  When I read the introduction my first thought was "Oh I am a warlock". There are differences between this game and being a warlock with an evil patron, but it has a very warlock feel to me. This was clearly made for people who have played games like DnD. This feels like a warlock subclass. I mean that in the beast way. It can be hard to convey tone in writing like this I assure you I have a positive tone.  l like warlocks. This is very cool. Personally I would have liked to see more of a focus on non combat skills, but that is a me problem.

I really like the idea of this game. It is clever. It is a nice reminder to take time for your self even at work. Every day I always try to find something fun to do. Sometimes I read children's books (we have a whole wrack of them). I just appreciate you spreading the message our jobs don't own our souls and we should have fun at work even if it something as simple and silly as pretending to be a spy.

I read the rules and I didn't quite get it. I could not appreciate how funny this game was going to be until I played it. It is easier to role play as a racoon pretending to be human that it is an actual human. This is one of the most charming and funny games I have seen in a while.

I have never seen Clerks. I have seen the last half of Chasing Amy. I still liked this game despite only getting half the joke. I like how this game could be serious if you wanted it to be, but it has very overtly funny prompts. I played this game late at night and there was something slightly surreal about it. I don't know. It feels like the kind of game I would play at work with a friend while pretending to wash the floors.

My first thought was of super heroes, but as I saw  more and thought about it the more grounded and personal the story became. I don't know if it is just me but by the end we were both battered bruised and scorned. We came closer to an understanding but we are not quite there yet. It will be many more fights before we can see eye to eye. One day I will get them to join the team.

I love the art. This is a very pretty game. The rules are simple and well thought out. I will give this game a seven because I definitely had too much fun with it. I like how the effects make the toys feel like actual physical things if that makes sense. I can not praise this game enough.

(I played this game before it was removed from the jam and it being removed will not save you from having to hear my thoughts on it.)

This game has a really strong start, but it sets you up for failure. Case and point I didn't finish the demo (I made it to the bar). My first impression of this game was that it would have lots of sex. And it had a lot of reading. The main character is boring and I know you make jokes about this, but it does not change the fact he is boring. The writing is very dry. The main character does not really have a goal. There are no steaks. He wants to make hell a better place but you don't elaborate on that. The characters don't do a lot to stand out. The first real character we are introduced to has the personality "Slutty." I liked the sex scenes, I see why you front loaded the game with one, the rest of the story is a bit boring. You should give the main character a prominent goal and flaw. Ie: "Only the person at the top can fix things so I am not even going to try until I am at the top. Anyone who tries to fix things from anywhere other than the top is wasting their time." Then give each girl a problem they are trying to fix from the bottom and you have to help them at first you try to fix everything from the top down, but realize that does actually work grow and learn along side the girls to overcome all of the problems and have sex along the way. You can disagree with me but there is just too much dialog. They talk and talk and never say anything.

  "If you're going to kink shame me, I'd prefer to get my work done."

  "Oh, yeah, it'd be a real shame if the paperwork wasn't filled out correctly. Perhaps it would even cause a total collapse of Hell just because Malacoda decided to stop filling out paperwork."

  "You know damn well that bureaucracy is the bread and butter of the torture we do to all white-collar humans on earth."

  "The amount of agony we collect from them visiting the DMV in one day is enough to power hell for weeks!"

  "Mark my words, Rubicante! One day, I'll be the head of the Eighth Circle Department. I'll ensure the coffee isn't freezing when I make it to work. How does one manage to make the coffee cold in Hell?"

  "You know Ciri makes the coffee. She was all hooves less than three years ago. Cut her a break."

  I played this game for about five minutes made no progress and gave up. I have played the old point and click style games and remember them fondly moon logic and all. Despite showing promise this game lacks direction. I would love to play again with some kind of quality of life improvements like having objects that can be interacted with light up when moused over.

  I liked the story enough to finish it. I do think it was lacking conflict and I was lacking personality. For all of the questions none of them had exciting or meaningful impacts. You could remove most of the questions and have the same outcome. I understand the reason for the questions is to build immersion make me feel like I live in the town, but the writing is not strong enough for that. You never once mentioned the smell of the ocean or the smell of anything. We made dinner and I don't know how it tasted. There are no sharp edges. Everything is vaguely pleasant. I would have killed for one character who does not like me. An old woman I wronged as a child, but don't remember how, telling Melanie I am a bad person and that she should avoid me leading to a conversation about making mistakes. Melanie has feeling about her family, but they are not 100% positive so we are not going to explore that. In one choice I said I was always outside, but then I said I was shy and suddenly I was always inside. It is a good story, but it is not great. And that is fine. I am not saying you should strive to be the best writer in the world. I enjoyed my time with this story. Given the subject matter it would feel wrong to ask for more.

I played the game for a little while and I liked it. I got scenes for the devil and the angel. I didn't love the voices at first but they grew on me after a few minutes. I do think the game's thumbnail needs at least one pony. I almost didn't see the game and ponies would make it stand out more. I liked the backgrounds and all of the other art. The writing is good 7/10. I don't have any strong opinions because the game is at such an early stage, but I did really like what I did see. I am looking forward to seeing more of the mares. 

  I had reservations about publishing this game for what I think are obvious reasons, but I am glad I did. It has been nice talking to you again.

  I hope you are right about censorship. I look forward to the day lesbian ponies are celebrated by everyone.

  Making an effort to be kind is a noble and worth while goal. I respect your ability to reflect and take actions to ensure you are the kind of person you want to be.

  If you ever want to talk you know how to contact me. :)

  To clarify, I don't think Teach Me Mama is political in the same way as this game. I was pointing out the fact many people would. When I said ask any creationist I was being hyperbolic. I know not every creationost denouces the taxanomical ranks. You asked a question and I was genuenly trying to answer it. Maybe I didn't do the best job. My point was this game is not taking as far a leap as it might first appear. It is a matter of persepective.

  I can't disagree with what you said and I am not going to try. I respect your opinons and broadly agree with you. Not compleatly, but in the words of Anthony Bordane "Surrounding myself with people who always agree with me is the most boring prospect I have ever heard."

 I know we talked about this before, but I don't know what wokenss or marxism are. I had a friend who was really into philosophy and he would tell me about it, and my eyes would glaze over. My knowledge of philosopy begins and ends with Plato. I acknowledge and appreciate you know a lot more about this than I do.

  I am glad you acknowledge there are exceptions. People who isnist things have to be a specific way are usally either surgeons or jackasses (as far as I can tell you are not either).

  When I said adult games are in of themselves political I was refering to the fact Porn Hub is banned in 22 states. I don't think adult games should be political, but they are. It is like rock music in the eighties (I think. I was not alive back then). Dee Snider had to testify infront of congress because they decided his music was political.

  I understand what you are saying and I hope you understand what I am saying even if you don't agree with me.

  I agree with you. I play adult games for the same reason (especally the pony imoutos). Adult games are in of themselves political. I know you know this better than most. I agree there is a time and place for politics and I am sure you will agree that does include in adult games. I don't necessarily want to see more political adult games, but if they are sincere and come from a good place I would not mind seeing more of them. I don't think the problem is my game is political. The problem is my game is heavy handed. If the game was more refined subtle I am sure you would like it more. This is vent art. Thanks for your concern. My brother and I are doing fine.

  I found your reaction interesting. Teach Me Mama is a political game. It teaches the taxanomical ranks. Any creatonist will tell you animals are grouped by "kinds" not taxanomical ranks. I have always been political. You just never noticed because up until now my games have aligned with your political views. You could argue this is not the same thing and I would agree, but not everyone would. 

  Thank you for your concern. My brother and I have been having fights like this for years. We will be fine.

I think it is a huge missed opportunity to have the girl on the puzzle screen. Right now the puzzle half of the game feel completely separate from the puzzle part of the game. It would be cute if she cheered me on when I completed puzzles. The girl should be the star of the game not an afterthought.

This is where I would put my mossy key if I had one.

I liked the game. The girls were cute. I met the princess but did not find enough flowers to get the sword. The street light guy outside the tent killed me. I played the game for quite a while. The combat feels a bit shallow. I never had a real strategy. I like the atmosphere and love the art. I am looking forward to seeing what comes next.

The moans were a choice. There are voice packs on Itch, but you do you. The moans are nice, except the random blahs. I don't want to sound like I don't like any of  the moans. I think it is interesting the boobs bounce nicely, but the facial expressions don't change. I understand why you prioritized the boobs and that you don't have unlimited time to work  on this, but a second facial expression would go a long way. This sounds negative. I like the game. It is fun. I liked watching the boobs bounce.

This is a great start. The scene with the yeti is fine. The elf girl is hot.  I am looking forward to seeing more.

I was confused as to why the Fuck Mode button didn't do anything. I did not scroll down before starting the game. The art is nice. Esther is very cute. The game is fine for what it is. I knew what I was supposed to do and had no trouble doing it.

I like this game. But, the jump is a little jarring. I played for fifteen minutes completed one quest and found two dead ends. I decided to stop playing because I started running past every bad guy after a few fights. I know it is early in the game and more abilities will open up, but first impressions are everything and combat is not very fun. I love the art and animation. The music is great too which is why it is so disappointing masturbation has no sound effects. Over all I would give the demo a 7/10. It is pretty good but there is room for improvement.

I really like the idea behind this game, but I don't understand why I had to completely create my character before playing the tutorial. I had no idea what I was doing and after playing the game for an hour that feeling did not go away. The game is confusing, that is not quite right, the game is obtuse. I never really understood why I was doing anything. I could do lots of stuff but I had no motivation. I do see this is a very early build, so I don't want to bee too mean but in the hour I played this game I never found myself having fun. If I really understood what I was doing I am sure i would have enjoyed it more, but as I just could not get into this game. GMTK has a video on how to teach complex games I think would benefit you.

Hey I have played this game before. I am glad you finished it. It was worth the wait. I liked Doll. Lady was super hot. The story was nice, if a little sad.  I liked most of the jokes. This is a good game. In complete honesty I really liked the kiss. It was sweet.

I really like this game. I have played a lot of games this jam all but three so far, and this one is contender for my favorite. It is simple, knows what it wants to be and executes it very well. It does not have a lot of meat on it's bones. after a few minutes I felt I saw everything it had to offer but that will not stop me from giving it a 10/10. This game is pretty much perfect.

I found the instructions unclear. I know. Hear me out. I thought I had to click a specific spot to get the clothe to come off. I found the game frustrating because I didn't know what I was doing wrong. I did eventually realize. I like the art and the music. It does not have anything particularly special, but it does not over promise either. I could think of worse ways of spending my time. 

The progression was way too slow. I chose to buy the wooden horse because it sounded interesting. It was fine. If I had to describe this game in one word it would be boring. It is slow and tedious and nothing happens. I know it is a demo. I did not have fun playing. Good luck though. A journey of one thousand miles begins with a single step. This is as good a start as any. 

This looks like a really fun and interesting game. I love the concept, but the presentation was confusing. I bounced off pretty quickly. I may come back and try again because games catering to this specific fetish are few and far between, but my first impression was not the best.

I am not sure what the upgrades do. I assume the house upgrades increase my energy and the work upgrades increase my money, but I am not sure. The game has a strong foundation and I can see ways it can go moving forward. I think it has a lot of potential.

I really like this game. My girlfriend is a delight. I was expecting the (Spoilers?) I was expecting the mermaid to be the correct choice, because movies, I am glad she was not. Spending time with your girlfriend should be the good ending.

The story is mostly well written. I am glad you did not miss spell tongue. It does leave something to be desired. Loupcy is going back to her life and so is Fiona which is fine. Casual sex is fine. But Fiona didn't grow or change. Her love life sucks and she is sad and frustrated by that fact, and after this night it is going to go back to sucking. There was no indication anything changed. As someone who likes tall women I was a little disappointed when Loupcy grew it felt like, and I am sure this was not your intention, you were saying little people can not be sexually desirable because of their height (which is a real problem little people face). I am sure you just think tall girls are hot, but by having her start off three feet tall and growing before sex and shrinking after it does have a connotation I don't think you intended. I see what you were going for, but you missed the mark. Ironically I think the story was too short. If Fiona had a girl she liked but was scared to ask out and after her night with Loupcy found her worth and asked the girl out I would like the story much more. The main character is lacking an arc. As Smut I can easily give it an 8/10. As a story it left me feeling unsatisfied. It is one re-write from a 10/10.

I really like this game. I do wish it had music. I could not get "keep your cool" to do any damage. I do wish I had a bit more control over the content of my deck. I never felt like I was making choices. Even when I had to choose card I just chose the strongest ones. I love the art and I see this games potential. 6/10 for now. Looking forward to seeing what comes next.

The animations are nice. I would like some music. This game is very bare bones. I will forget I played it in three days. Yes the animations are nice. Yes the characters are hot. No there is not anything special. 6/10.

 I am really glad you like the game. I recently started working on it again in the hopes of finishing it for your finish your nsfw game jam. It may be missing art for some scenes, but only time will tell. There will be alot more dates, double dates, clothe, locations, characters, mingames and fun facts. I hope you will give the game another play when it is "finished" in (with any luck) three days. It will be a while before the game is completly finished.

  Anytime Jacks lies you must respond "Really?" I am sorry if that was not clear. She only tells two lies.

   The "T" in The Apple's orchard and The "N" in Night ember are lowercase because they are lowercase when Jacks says them. In hindsight it should work either way. I am not sure why I was so strict. 

Thank you for playing the game. I appreciate it. :)