Great job with the smoothness of the animation transitions and feel. Mechanics all work really nicely. The nested level design could almost lean into modern Hitman games and be expanded as far as you like.

Some super fast tweaks I would make to help the player: especially with bold fonts, chop up the text into sections and give some space between sentences, also leave a little more room between the edges of the screen and the text. I'd also have the camera focussed more on the area of play, as in a 2D game when part of a level is running off-screen, the player might assume they are missing something important there.  Finally I'd try and condense the keyboard inputs into as few buttons as possible, so the player can pay more attention to the game and get into the flow.

I really enjoyed your game so I hope this doesn't  come across as negativity or criticism, you did a fantastic job!

The game mechanics are really good! I just wish that there are more levels because I would really love to keep playing the game more, and it lacks sound effects, but the graphics are pretty sick Im a fan of pixel art myself. 

Overall, would love to play this again with more levels, loved the idea, and its clear that you really put a lot of effort into it even while balancing your academics. Congrats man you did a great job at this game!

This is a cool game made by a teenager. The idea of mind control for robbery is fantastic. The different type of musics are also cool and well used.

The game could be improved with more sfx (it´s incredible how using 4/5 sound effects, the experiencie is more inmersive) and more puzzles (making more intermedial steps, like matrioskas: you need a key, but first you need to move a table to climb, but you need to control other person… etc.). Maybe also a story (why have you get this power; why do yo need to steal money; is there someone trying to haunting you?…). This kind of things enrich a lot the experience.

Great job!! Please keep doing what you like ^^

Music is beatifiul and chapters

Pretty good game

And also nice music

I hope you can play and also rank my game call ice tower.. It would mean a lot to me :)

( Also my game call ice tower is very short.. So don't think Is too late :) ) 

Congrats on your first game jam submission! I liked how simple the controls are and how they helped the player guide to their goals. 

Great story & art! Well executed game! I left you a rating. Please give our game jam game a play if you have a minute.

You did a fantastic job with the instructions and guiding the player, which is often overlooked. Well done, keep making games!

Oh i like the pixel art. Did u just said u r 14 and u make it all urself? Great job then!

Also pls rate, and give suggestions for my game if u dont mind :D

You should try to do something like bob the robber. It will be great according to your game mechanics.

Considering you're just 14 years old, this is a rather good game. I hope you make much better games in the future. 

Nice game, nice story.