ForestFightSave: everything refers to River being a man, except “‘You are alive and safe,’ you inform her. He groans and…”
OM-1-4(? or -3?) the AI was introduced as Helva, but ever after that, it was Esra
OM-2-Intermission1 “here here”
DeltaMarshallMeet “Googles rest on his head…” should be goggles
DeltaChat-Shay2 missing quotation mark after “get you something to drink”
DeltaChat-Shay6-2 “It might help job my memory” should be ‘jog’
DeltaChat-Shay10 ‘speel’ should be ‘spiel’ (thanks, ~German~)
Hey RadTad, thanks for sending these through! This is a big help.
If you come across any more, can you submit these through the bug report button? I've finally managed to fix Trigaea so I can compile fixes, so I'm going though these right now (finally.) It helps me mark every single fix off in one place rather than trawling the comments. :)
:’( but that way I lose some of the social aspects of reporting. The praise! The glory! But efficency is good, I guess. Question though, do you have a particular dialect of English you’re aiming for? For example, “enrolment” looked weird to my American eyes, but is technically valid, if not common in my dialect. I can just ignore technically valid stuff in general, but if you’re Ameican and/or want it all American normal, I can help with that (I’m much worse at catching things that are in my dialect but shouldn’t be, lol)
Also, minor grievance, it doesn’t make sense that we can’t venture to at least adjacent areas from non-home locations. I should be able to go to the forest from Delta, for example. Heckin’ weird to go home first. But I guess what there should really be is a whole fast travel mechanic, where jumping to more remote places nicks a bit of HP, and then maybe introducing some healing effect at Delta and any other bases that show up and that’d probably be a whole minor to moderate undertaking…
