Hey, just wanted to leave my 2 cents in. The atmosphere is interesting, but the design is a little frustrating. As ghostchibi has pointed out, there are too many links, most of them are simply examinations that require you to go back, and the navigation gets a little confusing.

My personal recommendation would be to separate "examine" links and "actions". Instead of having "examine" on the bottom of the page, the object to be examined can simply be a link itself in the text. Furthermore, you don't need to take the player to a new passage for every examination. You can have a section of the page dedicated for what the player is looking at, and it gets replaced with the description when you click on something. This would make the gameplay more convenient and transparent.

Of course it's just one possible way of doing things ^^

I've been running in loops around the house, which I assume is inevitable since this is a demo and not because I'm missing something (or maybe I am? who knows). The sudden descriptions of footsteps and breathing in passages I've visited before did give me a bit of a jolt, but I'm admittedly a scaredy cat. Images or sound in the final product will help the atmosphere I think.

If you'd like some more in-depth critique:

Since it's RE-based I'm not surprised to see all of the viscera, blood, and unidentified grossness, but I think maybe there's too much? Some of the choices felt like they were there just to reinforce that the house looks and smells gross, but that's already very well described. Visuals that are seen no matter what work well, but translated directly into text that you need to click in order to see, it ends up creating a distraction.