Great job with the overall retro aesthetic and music!
What I liked:
- Simple battles but each character had a unique goal (strike, escape, cleanse)
- Challenging lockpicking mini-game
- The stories revolving around the same tower
- Solid writing and dialogue throughout
- Show don't tell: great job involving the player without walls of story text
What might make it even better:
- The walking and text were sometimes too slow for my liking
- I was hoping for a big reveal at the end with the mysterious storyteller guy