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A jam submission

Orbit SketchView game page

A hand-drawn space game in pencil style
Submitted by MokonaNico — 1 hour, 15 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#13263.4123.412
Artwork#13463.8243.824
Enjoyment#21453.3533.353
Creativity#23353.6473.647
Narrative#28182.5882.588

Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
The theme "Loop" is represented by the spaceship's orbital path — you fly in loops around planets.

(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
see description for full credits

(Optional) What would you like to be called if GMTK features your game?
MokonaNico

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Comments

Submitted

This is really cute, but unfortunately it was too tough for me to get a handle on the controls, they didn't always work the way I expected. I was kind of making a sine wave at one point and I don't know why. It would also help if I could tell how close I was to the ground a little sooner (skyscrapers? mountains? trees maybe?)

Submitted

I really enjoyed playing the game. You've created a super cool, interesting visual style with a fun gameplay loop. The controls took a bit of time to acclimate to, but the the game is overall very fun to play once you get the controls down.

Developer

Thank you so much <3

Submitted

I love the overall aesthetic of the game! 
Though it seems there is some kind of parallax on the background that I would remove ^^

The controls requires precision and patience to get used to, it's not my type of game but I think some people loves it!

Good job!

Developer

Thank you for your feedback ! :)

I was just trying to do an infinite background, but the parallax problem is strange because it should not occur. There is probably an error in my code 

Submitted

Nice game! The idea of trying to stay in orbit is really fun.

Developer

Thank you ! :)

Submitted

I liked it. The controls are a bit awkward. I would like the ship not to gain speed so quickly during turns.

Developer

Thank you :)

And yes that's a bug that i'm not sure how to fix

Submitted

Fun and interesting game, the artwork is simple but works really well. Reminds me of Doodle Jump.

Developer

Thank you so much ! Doodle jump was one of my inspiration :)

Submitted

Great Game! Fine art and chilling music, it was very interesting to play!

Developer(+1)

Thank you ! :)

Submitted

Hello! The game was nice and simple. It took me a few tries to get the hang of the controls and not launch myself into the stratosphere, but after a few I was able to get the hang of it. The art was nice and simple, but the grid background can be a bit much when you are zooming around, though that's just me being nitpicky. I think the one thing the game could use is some type of indicator of the closest star. It didn't happen a lot, but a few times I'd lose control and zoom off, getting lost in the void. Overall, it's a nice, simple game, and I enjoyed playing it. Great work!

Developer

Yeah I didn't had this problem of launching afar myself when I playtest the game. I don't understand why it append and how I can fix it. Maybe just limit the max speed ? 

Thank you for your feedback and I'm glad that you enjoyed playing it :)

The game is too cute <3 it took me some time to get used to the controls but in the end I was able to complete all the levels :) I would like to play a longer version of it ! 

Developer

Thank you <3 

I'll maybe make one

Submitted

The game is very cute, interesting, and challenging. I really enjoyed the planetary gravity mechanic.

However, I’d love to see an increased camera range in future versions. I often lost because I couldn’t see where I was going, and I wasn’t able to complete the final level because of that.

That said, I still found the game very enjoyable overall. Great work!

Developer(+1)

Yeah I had the idea to implement a zoom/unzoom feature but the game look very weird and blurry from afar because of the doodle style. So I decided to not implement it. I don't know what would be a good solution to this problem.

Thank you for your feedback ! :)

Submitted

Cute!

Developer

Thanks :)

Submitted

I like the doodle-y style, Nice!

Developer

Thank you !