I understand your point. I am sorry for the changes, the chapter system and everything. I am not gonna change what I have done, but hope it get better in the future with all that I have in mind.
Gotta say, the old prologue didn't feel entirely well in my mind. This time, think of it like separate books. I know it's not the same and it stinks, but I won't do "days" in the future.
This is my way to write. I got your opinion on Tiger's character development, that won't change since I'll add what I had in a different order.
Thank you for your comment, it really helps.
Sorry, my English isn't perfect and I can't express perfectly all what I want to say.