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Masked Minos340 days ago

In terms of story or general minor updates? I'll update it if problems arises with the readers like the android error, but right now, this chapter in their story is done. Of course, that doesn't mean I'm done writing them.

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WagleUnagi339 days ago(+1)

General minor updates. There quite a few errors in the current version. Like sometimes the nametag is wrong so the wrong character says a line. There’s a few spelling errors but most of all, sometimes the LI’s name is Aster and sometimes it is Astor.

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Masked Minos339 days ago

Thank you for the update. I'll scan through and see what mistakes I can find. Besides the "Aster to Astor" error, was there any specific spots in the text where characters were speaking the wrong lines?

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WagleUnagi339 days ago(+1)

I don’t remember the exact spot but I think it was in the middle of the story.

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Masked Minos338 days ago

Thank you. I found the section where the characters were speaking each other's lines. I also fixed the name tags not showing and fixed what grammar problems I could find. I'll do another sweep of the script again to make sure everything is right.

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Masked Minos7 days ago

Hey! Sorry to bother you, I just wanted to ask something. I'll be touching up on the story and art for the anniversary of this VN, and I wanted to know more from someone more experience than me.

I know the story wasn't good looking back on it and was all over the place. My main focus is bettering the story while keeping beats and character development, but I would love a little insight on what works and what doesn't.

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WagleUnagi5 days ago(+1)

I’m sorry. I played this almost a year ago and don’t remember much about the VN besides what I wrote in my comments.

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Masked Minos5 days ago

You're fine. I knew it was far fetched to expect that you remember anything from it given, yeah it was a year ago. Regardless, thanks for the reply, and I hope revamp proves better than my original build.

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