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WagleUnagi338 days ago(+1)

I don’t remember the exact spot but I think it was in the middle of the story.

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Masked Minos338 days ago

Thank you. I found the section where the characters were speaking each other's lines. I also fixed the name tags not showing and fixed what grammar problems I could find. I'll do another sweep of the script again to make sure everything is right.

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Masked Minos7 days ago

Hey! Sorry to bother you, I just wanted to ask something. I'll be touching up on the story and art for the anniversary of this VN, and I wanted to know more from someone more experience than me.

I know the story wasn't good looking back on it and was all over the place. My main focus is bettering the story while keeping beats and character development, but I would love a little insight on what works and what doesn't.

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WagleUnagi5 days ago(+1)

I’m sorry. I played this almost a year ago and don’t remember much about the VN besides what I wrote in my comments.

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Masked Minos5 days ago

You're fine. I knew it was far fetched to expect that you remember anything from it given, yeah it was a year ago. Regardless, thanks for the reply, and I hope revamp proves better than my original build.

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