You're fine. I knew it was far fetched to expect that you remember anything from it given, yeah it was a year ago. Regardless, thanks for the reply, and I hope revamp proves better than my original build.
Hey! Sorry to bother you, I just wanted to ask something. I'll be touching up on the story and art for the anniversary of this VN, and I wanted to know more from someone more experience than me.
I know the story wasn't good looking back on it and was all over the place. My main focus is bettering the story while keeping beats and character development, but I would love a little insight on what works and what doesn't.
Hey! Sorry for the late reply. Thank you very much for the assistance. I didn't figure it out until now, so I was fine with no text sounds for the characters, but this changes everything. Thank you so much. <3
I'm glad you like it. Thank you for telling me how you feel about it. Overall, chapter 1 was completely re-written for a more tighter story and better character depth. I've posted a dev log explaining what was changed, but in short, the first release of this project was a completely different VN than it is now.
For the short stories, they will include some of Henry's adventure with other characters, but there will be some that mainly focuses on other characters that are present in the story. This way, I can show more of a character and their story, but also show more of the world I created. I hate to make a character and they only be seen once and never again.
Everything works perfectly for me. This is an amazing asset. I don't know if it was discussed before and I just missed it, but is there a way to have character voices play along with the sprite highlight? I have different audio beeps to play when certain characters talk but I got the error of a callback repeat. It's only when I took out one or the other is when the error is gone. I'm still new to coding, so I was wondering if having both was possible?
When I was recording for a friend, I got around to an hour and thirty minutes, but it was to make sure he was able to read everything. Depending on how fast you read, I'll say a little over an hour. I was working off 8000 words in text.
This was nice and sweet. I like the tackle of insecurity of going through or starting up a relationship. What also makes this a pleasant read was the light hearted moments to go along with the emotional ones.
Thank you. I found the section where the characters were speaking each other's lines. I also fixed the name tags not showing and fixed what grammar problems I could find. I'll do another sweep of the script again to make sure everything is right.
Thank you for the update. I'll scan through and see what mistakes I can find. Besides the "Aster to Astor" error, was there any specific spots in the text where characters were speaking the wrong lines?
In terms of story or general minor updates? I'll update it if problems arises with the readers like the android error, but right now, this chapter in their story is done. Of course, that doesn't mean I'm done writing them.
