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A jam submission

her body unswept by laughter.View game page

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Submitted by nurbrun — 32 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creativity#94.2064.206
Sound#323.6513.651
Simplicity#533.9373.937
WOWIE! (Overall)#693.4133.413
Visuals#1353.1433.143
Fun#1353.0953.095
Topic#1602.8732.873

Ranked from 63 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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(+1)

I like this SO DAMN MUCH. It seems like something out of a horror game but in text or SOMETHING like that

Developer

Thank you so much! Haha appreciate you playing & leaving a comment, it made my day

Submitted(+1)

Wow that was very different, I have never seen anything like it!! I really enjoyed it and it felt, weird idk how to describe but its a feeling you only get every once in a while. It was an amazing game!!

Developer

thanks so much!! 

Submitted(+1)

Really reminded me of a game called (I think) "My Uncle Works at Nintendo". I love how the text can change on the fly, even though text-based games never were my cup of tea. Well done! :)

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

thanks for playing! 

OMG just played it, it's amazing!!! i think it's built in the same system i'm using (twine) because it gives the same error code. this is literally what i wish i could do lol. thanks for recommending it

Submitted(+1)

It was a great mix of wholesome and cryptic, with sort of an undertale vibe, if that makes sense. Loved it, congratulations, it was an awesome experience, especially given the amount of time you had to work on it. Keep going.

Developer

Thanks so much for playing and your kind words!! <3 i really appreciate it

Submitted(+1)

Original for sure! Well done for a first game jam! Keep it up!

Developer

thanks for playing! i really enjoyed yours :)

Submitted(+1)

It needs a tutorial or a "how to play", other than that, it's really fun, good job :)

Please consider rating my game too ^^

Developer(+1)

ah, here you are haha! thanks for playing! and i'll definitely include a tutorial next time, i appreciate the feedback :)

your game was awesome and very addictive! 

Submitted

LOL!

 thanks a lot ^^

Submitted(+1)

It's an enjoyable experience, Very calm game.

I liked it :)

Developer

thanks for playing!!

Submitted(+1)

Original idea but im not just friend of text adventures. Still enjoyed. Keep working with original ideas like this. I like it

Developer

thanks for playing!

Submitted(+1)

Interesting and unexpected game ! I liked the originality of the gameplay and the choices. But Haven't seen much of the topic though (hidden links ?).

Developer

ah yes it's there but admittedly hard to get to.. blade 4 in the petals section says how to reach it (or just hover around the bits)! Thanks for playing

Submitted(+1)

This was so weird, I like it! :D I don't think I've seen another submission go with "broken text adventure" theme, so points for originality there, too. The music fits the mood, but gets a little bothersome after awhile. I wondered if there was a riddle to solve when a petal said something about third thorn and first petal... but couldn't figure out the other two sentences.

Developer

hey thanks for playing!! im sorry for the confusing language, they were just a few more "hidden links" to the clicked on anther and pistil sections :) 

Submitted(+1)

I really liked your game, made me super sad.... in an wholesome way :')

Developer

thanks for playing!! Can i ask why it made you sad? def not my intention haha

Submitted(+1)

I meant it in a good, poetic way P:

Developer

haha okay :) appreciate you playing and providing feedback!

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