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Hey Potatofuzz (ace name btw),

Right, same as last time for me, I'm gonna get analytical!

  • Art drew me right in before I even downloaded the game. Really like the rough and ready look.
  • I love this almost personal feel to the game. Like I'm reading a slice of life in a fantastical setting. Looking at you, nicknames board.
  • I like the atmosphere. It was melancholic. I had this feeling of a past well remembered.
  • The little to no instruction really made me want to explore (I even think I found a little Easter egg) and it fit the tone nicely.
  • the dialogue was punchy. Though I feel a more wistful pace for it would have fit nicer, however, what was there worked.
Good job on it and I look forward to seeing what you add,

Atomic Brainbag

Thank you!!

I was really going for a personal/intimate type thing, so I'm glad you felt that. I plan on all of the screens having the level of detail/more detail that you get with the nicknames one.

Ohh what Easter egg did you find?? That's something I'm super big on.

I'm def going to work on slowing the dialogue down a bit, because while I want it to be friendly, I do feel a bit thrown around when I go through it. Thanks so much for the feedback.

You really nailed it then.

It's the unfinished screen, where it's still a rough sketch on paper. Really like the look of the level.