This is really good. Very unsettling. I still have questions!

Agree with Stewart: great atmosphere, from start to finish. I found it really original and unsettling in all the right ways. I especially like the visuals and sound which are rare but very effective. Very nice job!

This was good! Great set-up, compelling writing and mood, and I enjoyed the execution. Reminds me of China Mieville in all the right ways.

A couple typos here and there (e.g. irreporable -> irreparable; “meddling things” -> “meddling with things”) but nothing egregious. Although I think it would benefit from a thorough proofread once the jam’s over. :)