Hmm not sure how I feel about this. I am a bit confused that it was updated after the deadline, but that may have been to remove some copyrighted material (as stated in another comment, it appears like some images had been used without proper rights).
The backgrounds now are pretty generic and don't really fit to the characters in my opinion. Would have loved to get to know the characters a bit more and explore their personalities. The music did not fit at some points, and having complete silence during the phone call could also be better. At least a small phone-ringing at the beginning of the call would have been nice.
I am not sure how this relates to the jam theme "surprise", or is the only surprise that you suddenly have a wife/partner at your home?
I would really like some clarifications, maybe I am just missing something...
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