Beautiful layout and artwork. Incredibly simple mechanics, though it works well with the game as a way to keep it from getting in the way of the story while adding tension. Love how much strategy is involved by picking which card you want to use when. I would honestly be bummed if this didn't make it into the collection.

The aesthetic of your layout is perfect! I also love how you managed to create a thematically appropriate resolution system. Oh, and the NPCs got a good chuckle out of me! Overall, it's really amazing how much information and flavour you've managed to pack into two pages.