Love the writing, art, and concept. Has a Bradbury vibe to it, I feel? The inclusion of burning the system itself really works for me, great work!

This game hits so hard! The design is concise and the concept comes through really clearly. You did a great job with the rolltables, especially for "The Scream" - so many good words and possibilities! Looking forward to playing this when I have safe access to fire!!

I haven't gotten the chance to gather people together yet and burn a map, but I love the concept of this game and I'm looking forward to trying to play it when I can do so safely!  The design is gorgeous. 

Oooohhhhhh I did the predictive text thing and got: The sun exploded and "then I got to see you." That's pretty freaking epic, I'll take it!

Also, this is so cool! You did an amazing job with the polish on it, that's the first thing that sticks out for sure. This looks like something you took weeks on! But beyond that, everything about it is awesome: the concept of literally burning the paper, getting a final message out before the sun eradicates everything, the prompts (especially the Transmitter page where you answer why you're there and such).

You have such a way with succinctness that punctuates emotion and humor, and you do it with such skill that it's one of those, "Okay I'm jealous af but in the 'I'm super happy for you' way" 🤣 Like "I'm inspired to take this challenge on myself and try to get good at it too." From the length of this reply alone you probably know I'm anything but succinct 🤣 

Seriously though, this is amazing and certainly not something I ever would've guessed was done in a week, it's epic af!

- ✨Beth

the art and layout are gorgeous! i love the concept of making this broadcast while watching the map burn. tight, concise, and intriguing. well done!

sick as hell concept (and layout!!) the fire element makes it so physical.