A real Ghost in the Shell of a read

nice use of color to break up the writing (just consider that some folks might be color blind in your choices - not me but I work with a lot of them)

The story of betrayal and technology merging with the supernatural was gripping. However, some parts felt a bit rushed, making it a bit tricky to follow all the details. Overall, a compelling read with a fantastic twist at the end!

I really enjoyed your concept for this one - it's very original, and it's always a treat to see the daemon as the character getting betrayed instead of the one doing the betraying.

Epic, clever and concise. One of the best so far! The ending was amazing.

I do love me a Change Demon tale. Thanks for this yarn.