Really like the characters ! The story was a little long to really start. Audio seems good but anytime I launch the game, I got the audio play twice with a delay, so I had to mute it because it was really annoying.

Great work !

I liked the characters a lot, but I wish the story would have gotten moving a bit more quickly. Great writing, especially the dialogue between Wren and her mother. The ending was a little abrupt but I loved the joke about dramatic irony--and now that I think about it, there were lots of other great little jokes sprinkled in there that made me smile. Overall, great work!

I really liked how it was all written and paced, it seemed to take it's time to develop the characters personalities, but then the ending felt a bit rushed, felt like something big was about to happen and then credits roll!! Interesting take overall y me da gusto ver a más gente de México haciendo juegos! Felicidades :)

Pros

• Very well written plot and characters! The plot was very engaging from start to finish and I loved the characters and their stories and personalities.
• Amazing visuals! I especially liked Wren and Thalia's designs.
• Great music! Very catchy and very fitting! Perfect choice of instruments!
• Perfect implementation of the magical realism theme. I loved Wren's ability to look into the past and how it is treated as something really common.

Cons

• Not really a con, but I'd wish the game was longer! Things were getting really interesting and I was rooting for Wren and Thalia to become an item and then the game ended haha.

Overall: short but amazing experience! Great visuals and music, and a fantastic storyline! This has a lot of potential, you definitely should keep working on it. Great work!

Oh this was super cute, I liked it a lot!!! I'd love it if you continued to tell Wren's story, I'm rooting for her and Thalia!!

The characters' personalities really shine through in the writing! Mom being on a texting basis with the school principal shakes me to the core.

wren best hair
thalia best waifu

I really like the concept and the dialogue is very well-written. This is a lovely game I enjoyed playing it a lot! Great work!

I totally love the characters sprites! It's a very polished game for being made in just a few days.