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A jam submission

My ordinary school lifeView game page

Short visual novel
Submitted by bigbruhh (@thebigbruhh) — 2 hours, 44 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#262.9823.286
Graphics#292.9823.286
Story#302.4632.714
Overall#312.6792.952
Enjoyment#332.7223.000
Theme#362.3342.571
Concept#372.5932.857

Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Did you use any optional theme? If so which one?

Didn't use an optional theme

What game engine did you use?
Gideros

Did you have fun? :D
Sure)

Discord username
bigbruhh0#1749

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Comments

Submitted

If the text is still crawling, I expect left click to finish the text crawl. But here it skipped to the next text. I missed some stuff because of that.

When I chose to hide downstairs, and it said no, let's hide outside, immediately I felt like my choices didn't matter, and it became not a game but a story.

"Why does god want to send me to lessons" - hilarious, whether or not intentionally ;)

Good presentation, great music.

Developer

thanks for reply!

Yep,i didnt think that text will be skipped like this,i will fix it

By "downstairs" i meant "go down to the first floor"

Submitted

I think you have the beginning of an interesting amnesia/horror story here, and I hope you keep working on it!

Developer

Hey! Thanks for reply! Sure, i will work on it after short break!

Submitted

I didn't connect the theme with the story. The narrator was moreso subjective than unreliable imo, although I found his innocent and very matter-of-fact dialogue quite charming. Solid audio too.

Also, I noticed that clicking would skipped the current dialogue. I think it would be better if the first click typed everything out and the second click skipped it.

Developer

thanks for replying!

I just didn't have time to make the full story

 at this stage I was planning only getting to know the characters and the world in general

all the other solutions that were in my head, I simply did not have time to integrate it into the game:D

I just wanted to do everything gradually with different paths, so at the very beginning everything should be rosy and fun xD


thanks for advice! i will implement it in next build!

Developer
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Submitted

Ah no! Just when the story was getting interesting! :(

Some feedback:

  • I think there was a bug when I go left into the music room and when the lady exits, and I exit and return back, the same dialogue plays out. Maybe that was intentional or a bug (I couldn't figure that out :(   )
  • At times there was a bit too much text; but that's just me
  • You used sound effects and music effectively; well done

I was getting into it, and then you took it away! :P Jokes aside, very well done :)

Developer(+1)

thanks for feedback!

i just didnt implemented life-time story changing now, so because of this the same dialogue plays out

yep,musics is really cool!  Thanks to jeremiahwat :D