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Lost Relic Games - GAME JAM

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A jam submission

RapidyView game page

A bird searching for her eggs faces continuous obstacles and she has to survive as much as she can.

Submitted by mayankbhaisora — 1 hour, 55 minutes before the deadline

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Criteria	Rank	Score*	Raw Score
Fun	#44	3.661	4.308
Game Design	#51	3.661	4.308
Overall	#90	3.465	4.077
Art Direction	#91	3.661	4.308
Innovation	#100	3.399	4.000
Theme	#279	2.942	3.462

Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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freeworld404Submitted1 year ago(+1)

Great job! Feels so well done for this short amount of time, like something you could actually find for mobile devices. I'm impressed you managed to put in everything from high scores, some nice stats tracking like the total number of eggs collected, settings, an app icon, sound and music, easy and quick restart, and a 'tutorial' screen!
I also like the mechanics: feels just difficult enough to play one more round after a game over and the dashing is a great addition with the platforms moving upwards, without making it easy.

Great entry, I had fun!

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mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago(+1)

Thanks for your review. I had few reusable classes like manager classes and other simple scripts and UI Prefabs which I had created earlier during learning process. Those assets helped a lot i just had to tweak them a little like PreferenceManager, Audio Manager, Score Manager, UIManager, TapInput script etc…

Hopefully I will be able to turn this into a proper mobile game. Any feedback on improvement areas will help me a lot.

Thank you.

auropsoftSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

It's a lot of fun, and the dash feels great (though super risky because it's hard to control).

Not having a web build was a bit of thing, but it runs smoothly on mac.

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mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Thank you bro. I will work on game and provide support for multiple platforms.

lunar-wireSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

Sorry, only having Windows machines. If your engine allows it, consider a play in browser export to overcome OS barriers in the future. Very sorry I couldn't play Rapidy.

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mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

I am sorry brother. It was my bad that I didn’t export the game on web and windows. 😔

lunar-wireSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

I'll check back on it after the voting phase :)

Virtual NomadSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

i'm with lunar-wire. i've followed you and will come back to play & offer feedback once web or windows builds are available. meanwhile, this jam and your first offering have already rewarded you. you just probably don't realize it yet :)

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Thanks man… I hope after submitting my first game ever, it will give me more motivation which i have been lacking so far…

rotubSubmitted1 year ago (1 edit)

I made the same mistake :( I only did a windows version, and no web version...

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Is it your first game jam too?

rotubSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

Yeah :)

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

I checked the video of your game. Looks nice environment and booster looks good.

rotubSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

Thanks mate, if you update your page after the jam I will give it a play. Regardless, congrats on completing a game!

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

thank you bro

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Hey brother, I have updated the game build for WebGL and made some changes in the game as well. Can you please play the game and share improvement points?

rotubSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

Hey mate, nice job following through on updating and releasing the game!

I gave it play - it's quite fun! The controls were easy to pick up and yet felt like they could be further mastered from a player perspective which was great. The music was catchy and set the scene nicely.

The gameplay is really good and smooth - really impressive. Seems to be your strength! Here are some points for improvement:

The items blend into the background a bit too much and the special items don't make an exciting enough sound (although the stars explosion is good)
The UI is hard to read and there are too many colors and fonts. Pick one font and like 2-3 colors for the menu screen.
Don't put text over the icons. It makes it hard to read and messy looking.
Some text is diagonal while the other text isn't - this is distracting and makes the game look amateur
You're using a home button for the store which was confusing. Look for a more specific store icon.
The down arrow I had no idea what it was until I clicked it - copy other websites/apps with their icons... there is a very recognizable downloads icon to use instead.
You have misspelled "Enable" in the settings page
The shop page text is too small I can't read it
The UI during gameplay is also too blended into the background - it took me a while to notice the electricity icon

The main downside to the game is lack contrast - everything looks as important as everything else. So I don't know where to look. On the main menu it's an overwhelming wall of text and images. IMO it would be better to keep things simple and just have text for the menu items all in one font and one size. And during gameplay the background needs to be simplified or faded to make the foreground items stand out more.

But hey you have done a great job overall. On top of that you have set the ground work to build upon it with more levels and purchasable items. Something I didn't do for my first game which you might like to check out by the way as it has similar aspects to yours - it's called Swoopy Boi and it is on iOS and Android.

Good luck

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Thank you so much man. This means a lot. I will improve on the points you have mentioned. Definitely going to check your game.

🖤

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Hi Lunar,

I have updated the game and uploaded the WebGL build. Now the game can be played on browser. Can you please play and provide your valuable feedback?

lunar-wireSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

Sure, I'll check it out first thing tomorrow!

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Okay bro. Thanks :)

IrememberDFGSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

Only a mac download? Or did I miss the windows download?

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mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

No bro… It’s my bad. Sorry… I should have exported the game in other formats as well. Just couldn’t think about it and just exported for macos. 😕

mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Hey, I have updated the build to support WebGL and made some improvements and art asset changed in the game. Can you please test it if possible. Thanks.

DamianDevzSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

Fun gameplay, adorable art, and love the story you went for as well.

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mayankbhaisoraDeveloper1 year ago

Thanks man.. It seems you are the only one who could play the gam. Please share share feedback if possible. This is my first game and I want to properly finish it.