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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall feeling | #30 | 3.145 | 3.556 |
| Narration | #31 | 3.047 | 3.444 |
| Originality | #39 | 2.556 | 2.889 |
| Theme | #40 | 2.261 | 2.556 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The ending I got definitely wasn't ideal - I might come back and try for another later on.
One thing I think would make for a small but significant improvement to this would be the option not to answer the call at the very beginning. You don't need an entire storyline there - just a basic "You reject the call and sit around all day doing nothing" would suffice - but since it literally asks "Will you pick up?" it feels a little restrictive to have only one option available.
The snappy and dialogue-heavy writing worked really well here, and the creepy build up was done very nicely!
Effective art and interesting, breezy writing. And I agree, a bit scary.
This had a really cool premise, and it was pretty scary to boot. I’ll have to try for other endings
Thanks!