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I see what you’re going for here, but I don’t think the game balance quite gets it across. The same as a few others here, I breezed through the game while mostly making the more sustainable choices, but still got the “Earth becomes uninhabitable” ending, which seems to suggest that the current system would be fine if we simply had different billionaires (like me, overseeing a responsible business that delivers organic lemonade by bicycle).

I understand keeping the difficulty reasonable so people can reliably reach that ending, but the trouble is that those who make it there without trashing the environment themselves are getting a different ending.

Also, the decision of whether or not to buy up the competition feels kind of off to me. For one thing, I feel it’s possible to read this as turning around other companies who are undercutting me by making all the unethical choices I didn’t. For another, I can’t fathom why choosing to lower prices has the effect of raising prices:

I had been hoping to get them to move only horizontally or vertically (and ideally not stack) so that there was potential to coax them into easily laserable lines, but ultimately just barely had time to get the controls and basic movement working. Turns out an hour really isn’t a lot of time, even if you’re aiming for something modest from the start!

A 108MB GIF? In this economy???

I love the little skeleton faces on everything - the stretchy horse one especially. The kazoo music is really good too! An incredibly well polished little experience overall.

I’m absolutely floored by the fact this was made in Twine. It was a bit of a pain to get it running (WebGPU doesn’t seem to play nicely with any browser on my Linux machine), but seeing the results was more than worth the hassle. I think I ultimately got stuck on the final floor after restarting: the locked gates returned to their original position, but the enemies and lever in the side rooms weren’t available to open them up again. It’s a bit of a shame to miss whatever ending there is, but I was already super impressed by everything that came before. The game looks amazing and the humour suits it really nicely. (Pokey Pete is my favourite.)

This is fantastic! My favourite detail is “Okay, we’ll wait a minute” followed by precisely one minute of waiting - though I’m not sure it makes sense to circle back to before you’re asked what kind of animal you are rather than just a “It’s been a minute. How about now?” line. The fight sequence is amazing and I love that both possible endings actually make solid sense in the context of this bizarre setup. It’s very polished for something this crayon- and kazoo-y!

It’s interesting to see such a minimalist take on the jam, particularly when the story builds so heavily on the particular assets chosen. I feel as though it lends some extra significance to the mention of drawing materials and artwork in both stories as well.

I’ve said it before, but it’s super neat to see a GameBoy take on this jam. Even if the plain colour tile apparently didn’t work as a background, I’m astounded how readable (yet still crayon-y) you’ve managed to make the other assets despite the small size and constrained palette. The game’s fun, too: I like that there’s so much to poke around an explore, and Story Mode strikes me as pretty ambitious on its own (though I’m afraid I got caught out during the hacking minigame having forgotten which keyboard key was A and which was B!).

This is a weirdly beautiful take on the jam. I think it’s helped by the original crayon assets (which I’ll freely admit are better than what I can draw myself), but at the same time the ones from the pack are put to excellent use. I love the ghost as a costume, and the way the shop owner simply poofs into existence behind the counter.

I’ve got them - thanks! Though if there’s any chance you’d be happy to keep them on the page until the jam submission period is over, that would make them available to anyone coming to this thread looking for additional assets (since I almost certainly won’t have the Community Expansion available before the end of the jam). Realistically I don’t know how likely it is that anyone else is going to tackle a GameBoy game in that time, but if they are then having some sprites with the right colour palette and resolution seems as though it could be a significant leg up!

Simple but sweet! I like this.

Mostly replying here just to make sure you get a notification: I’ve posted a response to Unpainted Productions that might clear things up for you too. Also, I love the look of your game so far! The key/buttons/etc. are absolutely no problem: they’re obviously drawn from the Crayon and Kazoo pack. In fact, if there’s any chance you’d be willing to share them with others, I’m now collecting submissions for a community expansion.

These screenshots look amazing! It’s really neat to see a GameBoy game for this. The first thing to mention would be that I wouldn’t disqualify your game based on what you describe. The boat/face/etc. might prompt judges to give a lower score in the “Use of Crayon and Kazoo assets” category, but I’m not kicking submissions out unless they obviously aren’t using the assets at all. I’ve so far only booted one and it was AI garbage that had obviously been spammed into every jam going.

When it comes to the QR codes and UI stuff I wouldn’t hold that against it. Strictly speaking you probably could cobble together arrows etc. using the crayon assets and that would be more in keeping with the rules, but if they’re unobtrusive enough to look like something that a game engine would have built in then they’re unlikely to affect your score on that front. A QR code in particular I wouldn’t even consider an asset: it’s not in there as eye candy, just a way of encoding information so it can be scanned.

In case it helps, I spotted the issue with the font in other people’s projects: there’s now a fixed version. (I could actually do with touching up the “l” as well but it doesn’t affect the spacing.)

Also, if you’ve modified any of the assets in a way that others may find useful, this thread has prompted me to begin inviting submissions for a community expansion.

Have you modified a Premium Crayon or Kazoo asset in an interesting way? Perhaps you’ve mashed two images together, or produced a neat variation of one of the sounds. Share it here to submit to Volume 1 of the Premium Crayon and Kazoo Asset Pack Community Expansion! Images may be posted here directly (and I encourage you to include at least one as a preview if you can). For audio or larger collections of assets, consider uploading them elsewhere and providing a link.

Once there’s a significant enough selection of images and sounds to form a useful expansion to the asset pack, I’ll bundle them together into a zip file and make it available to everyone for FREE. This will act as a kind of sampler for the asset pack itself, as well as widening the range of items available for those who already own it.

By submitting your work here you agree that it may distributed under the same terms as the Premium Crayon and Kazoo Asset Pack itself: that is, for both personal and commercial use without attribution. However, please do let me know how you’d like to be credited as I’ll name all contributors in the Community Expansion itself.

The animations in this are fantastic. I’m also impressed by the comparatively deep gun battle!

The shift from the knight to the skeleton is fantastic. I love the BOSS too.

I’ve just released the Premium Crayon and Kazoo Asset Pack - a carefully curated selection of sounds and images with a cohesive style.

The pack normally sells for $9,999.99, but up until April 30th I’m dropping the price to $0. Also until April 30th I’m running a jam so people can share whatever they make with this! Please do consider throwing your hat in the ring - I think it’ll be fun.

Brand new today, I’ve launched the Premium Crayon and Kazoo Jam! This is a jam that invites participants to make something using the Premium Crayon and Kazoo Asset Pack, which is also FREE for the duration of the jam - ordinarily it would set you back $10,000. The point of the jam is to exclusively use assets from this pack: a constraint that I think will prompt people to come up with things they might not have otherwise! Here’s just one example of the sort of thing you could make with it:

That’s just a suggestion though. In fact, there’s no requirement that your submission actually be a game at all: it could be a book, or a comic, or an audio drama - pretty much anything you like! I’m looking forward to seeing what everyone comes up with.

Absolutely everything in this (barring the font used for the title, which is one I bought from Chequered Ink) is a stock asset from RPG Maker MV. Of the 48 hours available for the game jam, I think I used about four. ^^;

I was already happy just to have the excellent range of assets. A native Linux launcher seems like the cherry on top.

I thought that up almost the moment the “mask” theme was revealed and figured it was a case of “First idea, best idea.”

The temporary door-opening key is a clever enough idea that I’m kind of surprised nobody else (as far as I’m aware) has done it.

It’s amazing how much difference the settings make to the same basic sound. Though because of that, it might be handy to have a “default” button as well as a “randomise” button. I can see myself using this for jam games: it’s good to have something readily available with this kind of consistency between sounds without just coming back to the same existing asset packs again and again.

I actually really liked that cat-licking-paw portrait! On the whole the new versions here do strike me as a step up - all those bears in particular are looking great - but the previous ones hardly seem inappropriate either.

I haven’t actually played this yet, but the cover gif is so goooood. Horrifying, but goooood.

Oh no.

Ah! That makes sense - it did feel as though there must have been something in there because I figured otherwise you would have gone with a different end screen. I did make it through without dying myself. The difficulty felt reasonable, though: there were a couple of occasions where I started to get swarmed and had to leg it!

The sound and graphics for this are so goooood. I love the stylised yellow blood splatter in particular. I managed to grapple one of the big guys while falling down a long drop, and the spray on the walls seemed weirdly fitting - is the blood actually a cluster of objects that “splat” when they hit a surface? It’s also really good to finish off with a solid boss battle: suddenly having grapple act as a way of exploiting an opening rather than just an insta-kill was very satisfying, especially because the fight was so intuitive.

I feel as though the main areas fo improvement here are the story and theme. The tagline in the cover image is “rise against control,” but then the ending tells me I’ve “controlled the gym and saved the couples” (after fighting to control levels/areas throughout) so that feels a bit muddled. Unless I missed something at the beginning, it could perhaps do with a little scene that establishes what’s going on before jumping into gameplay. (Also, though the tutorial text works very well, it says “Hold C to jump higher” when the jump key is Z.) But that’s all basically just polishing - the game itself is hugely impressive, especially for the time available during the jam.

Actually, having just had a go at your game myself, it looks as though it’s among the 10% or so most rated, so you really don’t need to worry about its score getting adjusted down or anything. 20-30 ratings might not seem like a lot, but if you look at the submissions in need of ratings they’re all in single digits.

Yeah, in terms of getting more players an itch version probably can’t make much difference at this stage. Though reading that rule again, it says it has to be on itch “for rating” and it’s entirely possible to rate yours on itch, so hopefully that qualifies.

I guess the other thing for next time is to upload the game far enough ahead of time that it doesn’t get screwed up by some last-minute problem. (I got in the habit of submitting mine well in advance because of Global Game Jam, where there have been issues with the site going down due to everybody submitting games right before the deadline.)

Definitely make sure you’ve got an attention-grabbing cover image (and screenshots, and a solid description, etc.). Don’t put a ton of effort into making the game and then skimp on everything that actually gets people to give it a go in the first place.

Yours actually looks pretty good in that respect, though. The main problem, I think, is that there’s no game on itch so it’s that much harder for people to play and rate. The jam rules actually say “Games must be submitted through itch.io for rating as well as gd.games” - maybe you could still upload one? It certainly seems worth asking the organisers.

No, it’s not for mobile. That’s why this message appears when you visit the page on mobile:

Strictly speaking you could play it on a phone, but you’d need a keyboard. The game depends on the keys listed in the description:

Thanks! I would have loved to team up with an artist for this, but didn’t have time to organise that on top of getting the game working so ended up relying quite a bit on asset store material. It would definitely be nice to expand the idea in future. If I did add power-ups, I’d probably make them another thing to defend (so you get a shield or some kind of super-shot, but they’re activated using a button that can be stolen just like the others).

This is a fun idea, but personally I found it frustrating beyond what I expect was intended. The hyperspace shooter thingy popped up at random so often that it was a real slog to get anywhere, and having been told “Don’t click anything suspicious” it took me a really long time to figure out that shooting the “Hahahaha” demon face would actually hamper the virus’ progress. On top of that, the terminal text extended beyond its own window and on top of other windows (meaning I could have a popup positioned above the terminal, but below the text within the terminal). But with a bit more polish I think this could work really nicely. It’s a very ambitious idea to pull off within the timeframe of a game jam.

This is a really nice take on a Peggle-type game. Having to try and get the ball into the right funnel at the bottom adds another layer of interest, and being able to “take control” of it from time to time also helps it feel more skill-based. I never quite grasped how “peg swap” worked or what all the special balls offered, but I also ran into a bug pretty early where the aiming arrow became disconnected from the ball… …and then after that ball dropped out of the level and the next one appeared, I had two arrows at once. Around this point it also started running at a bit of a crawl, which I’m almost certain was related rather than anything that would have happened under non-bugged circumstances. I feel as though I’d essentially got the measure of it before then, though. I might still come back to it later! It’s always good to see a jam game that fits the theme, but makes for a strong enough idea that it would work well in its own right. Very impressive work, especially for the time available.

I wondered if anybody else would interpret the theme as “literally picking up buttons,” but making it the Ctrl key specifically is fantastic. It’s a great range of levels for it, too, and little details like the camera movement are really nicely handled. I found this sometimes started running slowly on my machine at times (I think after alerting a large number of enemies in the same level?) and it was occasionally difficult to identify what was a wall and what was a drop (especially in the final level, which I never managed to complete), but I think the overall appearance of the game works well. It feels very polished for a jam entry on the whole.

Top-notch cover image, by the way. It looks fantastic, and strongly implies the game title even without having it actually written on there.

Thanks for playing! I think you’re right about the explanation - I’ve updated it to be a little more up-front about what you’re actually supposed to be doing here.

I really don’t know why people settle for AI thumbnails. They look like hot garbage. They rarely represent what the game is actually like. You could honestly just slap the game title on top of a screenshot and it would make a better first impression.

I’m not sure it’s very responsible to provide people with a detailed guide to being a villain. >:-(

Thank you! The pronouns for the acolyte shouldn’t vary within a single passage, but they will be randomised for each playthrough. Chances are I’ve got an actual “he” written in at some point: I’ll see if I can find it.