The concept for the story was interesting and the storytelling world-building was done effectively, but the game play was just kind of meh.  I'd probably be less critical of the game-play, if the game were to commit fully to being an RPG or to being an IF game.

Descriptive but not overwrought. The RPG elements worked well to get investment and they felt meaningful.

Really liked this, especially your descriptive writing.

I don't think you can solve the riddle through pure deduction :)