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A jam submission

Brink of RevelationView game page

Submitted by lonelyashtree — 23 hours, 33 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Narration#143.4183.625
Originality#193.0643.250
Overall feeling#203.0643.250

Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

The concept for the story was interesting and the storytelling world-building was done effectively, but the game play was just kind of meh.  I'd probably be less critical of the game-play, if the game were to commit fully to being an RPG or to being an IF game.

Submitted

Descriptive but not overwrought. The RPG elements worked well to get investment and they felt meaningful.

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Really liked this, especially your descriptive writing.

Submitted

I don't think you can solve the riddle through pure deduction :)