Is Dee's Tonic just flavor text? I tried making it to see if there was a second ending, and it didn't work.
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Presentation | #3009 | 2.558 | 3.273 |
Overall | #3375 | 2.416 | 3.091 |
Fun | #3509 | 2.203 | 2.818 |
Originality | #3533 | 2.487 | 3.182 |
Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
The primary mechanic of the game is the "joining together" of alchemical elements to induce reactions.
Did your team create the vast majority of the art during the 48 hours?
We used pre-existing art
Did your team create the vast majority of the music during the 48 hours?
We used pre-existing audio
Comments
Very impressive game, had to double check it was Game Jam submission it felt so finished, Sweet story and interesting puzzle concept! Well done!!
Some of the "puzzle" was a bit difficult to pick out because steps referenced words buried inside of descriptions in other books, so I was stuck for a bit, but otherwise a pretty fun/short game.
I really like the art style (especially the opening cutscene) I sadly couldn't play the game due to GUI, but I really hope this game gets more ratings!
Great job on making the presentation feel so unified. All the little touches, the music, the page sounds, and the cutscenes really got me immersed. It's rare I'm invested in the story of a jam game! I enjoyed messing around with the alchemy system too, although I only got to making exalted AV.
Two small suggestions that I think would improve things if you ever return to the game.
- Nix the abbreviations for the elements, none of these words are particularly long and if I'm doing a lot of reading I'd rather just see the word
- Add a skip button to the dialogue, I accidentally got stuck in a loop of the really long first conversation with Dee. :)
I think I'm having the same problem as HLR Studios, who commented before me. Either way, I really like the narrative you've got going, and the small details like the little beeps when the text scrolls by is really nice. I also noticed the text scrolled by at different speeds, which though small, I really appreciate cause I'm all for the tiny details. Great job!
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