Great job on making the presentation feel so unified. All the little touches, the music, the page sounds, and the cutscenes really got me immersed. It's rare I'm invested in the story of a jam game! I enjoyed messing around with the alchemy system too, although I only got to making exalted AV.
Two small suggestions that I think would improve things if you ever return to the game.
- Nix the abbreviations for the elements, none of these words are particularly long and if I'm doing a lot of reading I'd rather just see the word
- Add a skip button to the dialogue, I accidentally got stuck in a loop of the really long first conversation with Dee. :)