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Game Jam - Death is only the beginning, Tale of Tamsin's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Story | #125 | 3.231 | 3.231 |
| Theme | #289 | 3.231 | 3.231 |
| Music | #370 | 2.808 | 2.808 |
| Aesthetics | #489 | 2.846 | 2.846 |
| Sound | #513 | 2.077 | 2.077 |
| Mechanics | #625 | 2.115 | 2.115 |
| Fun | #697 | 1.923 | 1.923 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How many people worked on this game total?
1
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https://kidvfx.itch.io/game-jam-death-is-only-the-beginning-tale-of-tamsin
Comments
Love your storytelling method with the NPC and the rebuilding with the seeds. Great start.
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Find The HeroThis has potential. Not so much a fan of the tank controls though, but doesn't put me off from it completely either. I laughed a bit when all the NPCs were talking about the world ending and all the death and carnage, and the music in the background was bright and cheery. I would say, it needs more art direction. Right now it looks like a mishmash of different assets conveying different styles, but I understand there probably wasn't enough time for you to make everything look cohesive. Still, impressive work and congrats on submitting!
Submitted
Outer DarknessNice game! I really like the twist of the psychedelic second level. It made me curious to see more! One thing that distracted me a bit was the different level of quality of the imported character assets, but I think if you'd want to continue this game idea and grab a cheap character pack from the store, you could make an interesting story game.
Nice game! I really like the twist of the psychedelic second level. It made me curious to see more! One thing that distracted me a bit was the different level of quality of the imported character assets, but I think if you'd want to continue this game idea and grab a cheap character pack from the store, you could make an interesting story game.
Very cool! Definitely unfinished but it looks like you can take the project very far if you wanted!
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Magic PixelObviously the game is unfinished, It was hard for me to understand exactly what to do and where to go, so i spent more time figuring out what was going on then the story. definitely think this was a game idea that would have been much better long term project than game jam. but i bet you learned a lot i am making a similar type 3d story game, and it takes a lot.
Submitted
Durable TimHi, thanks for the feedback. I agree with what you said. I'm still quite new to unity and this is something I felt I could do due to previous learning. In hindsight I wish I just built something more simple and more playable. Time was a big factor and I had rebuild the entire second level on the last day due to build errors. Definitely a learning curve. It's certainly not easy at this stage to knock something up haha!
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