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A jam submission

boy-separates-girlView game page

A short story about love.
Submitted by ribon (@ribon_twt) — 9 days, 5 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
MOOD | Did the game have atmosphere or make you feel something#114.0004.000
VISUAL | Did the game have nice graphics or art direction#443.6673.667
Overall#713.0443.044
AUDIO | Did the game have great music or sound design#852.6672.667
FUN | Was the game satisfying to play or did it bring you joy#1032.5562.556
IDEA | Was this game super interesting or innovative#1142.3332.333

Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

I really like the feeling you went for in this narrative. The bird scene and its accompanying poem matched the story well :)

Submitted

Even though it was short, I loved it  :)

Submitted

neat little visual novel with cute art! i enjoyed this :)

Submitted

Short Visual Novel with some touches of poetry throughout its narrative. The story felt like it was projecting someone's personal experience with a relationship. The art for the characters was simple and the music that played was chill. Nice work!

Submitted

You know, for such a short VN, it managed to make me feel things. And the whole mood it had with the music, the solid color yellow background and the constant switch between the girl and the buy, it was quite good in a weird way. The choice to never have the girl and the boy on the same screen and the frequent switches really added to the story. I'm glad you made this and I'm glad I played it. :)