I actually really enjoyed this! Even if the descriptions are simple and the choices are simple I actually find the tone all in all really nice. I know sound with twine games is tricky but I think with just some ambient sounds this could be a really nice atmospheric experience that left me feeling surprisingly calmed and nice afterward.
Yeah, I thought keeping the tone a bit more simple/flat would help come off as less stilted. Glad to hear that that seems to have worked in some way. And glad to hear that you enjoyed it!
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I actually really enjoyed this! Even if the descriptions are simple and the choices are simple I actually find the tone all in all really nice. I know sound with twine games is tricky but I think with just some ambient sounds this could be a really nice atmospheric experience that left me feeling surprisingly calmed and nice afterward.
I think it was a really nice experience!
Yeah, I thought keeping the tone a bit more simple/flat would help come off as less stilted. Glad to hear that that seems to have worked in some way. And glad to hear that you enjoyed it!