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introduce your main characters!

A topic by SWANCHIME created 30 days ago Views: 246 Replies: 12
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Submitted(+5)

hi! since it's a vn jam, characters are king! 

I have a lot of different ideas rotating in my mind but the main dynamic is going to be based off the phrase  "kill all kings" that my friend gave their butch character giving her femme an akira style jacket saying this in a cyberpunk setting. 

I just think I want to draw yue xianming, who has a secret reputation as lord yan, known in the gangs a the chinese king of hell, wearing a jacket that says this. but I was also rotating (AT THE SAME TIME?!) the bl style homophobia exploration And a cutey pink bubblegum color scheme + twilight periwinkle + black and white. (other friend made a per card color change widget) 

yue xianming is normally an openly gender ambiguous but insanely beautiful (beautiful, and insane) crazy bitch (affectionate) and also a gang empress. a bit obsessed with zhouyu. 

qian zhouyu is fundamentally A Normal Guy (That Is A Woman) and has a lot of trouble (trauma) around desiring and being desired by "other" men, but is also a he/him woman himself. he's got a trash mouth and is hostile and abrasive and expresses himself poorly but loves xianming very deeply. 

excited to work on this!! 

HostSubmitted(+3)

OMG this sounds so awesome lol. Very excited to read…..As much as I loved Count Kagura i admittedly still havent read your other works quite yet so I’ll have to get on that….. ;>

Im going to be writing about my characters Adair and Ximun (as I often do.) I have a lot of big plans for rewriting the origin story of their friendship that I had made last year, and I wanted my jam entry to be a sort of concept idea for the new prologue to that.

Against their will, Adair is always super popular no matter where they go. They were born with an extremely rare power that constantly broadcasts itself to those around them by emitting this huge aura of magic. Basically like a neon sign over their head that says “I AM SPECIAL”. Around the time this story takes place they have begun to fall into a deep depression. They obsessively mask nearly every aspect of themself to try to avoid any negative attention, but also to try to dissuade others from wanting to actually get to know them.

Meanwhile, the most notoriety Ximun carries with him is simply a little bit of a reputation among his fellow track kids for how erratic his behavior can be (he is plural). But then he similarly ends up getting shoved into the spotlight, albeit temporarily and to a lesser degree, for a significant athletic achievement.

Adair and Ximun meet as a result of their similar situations bringing them together. They become fascinated with each other almost instantly. In my original version of this story, Adair is really the one doing the heavy-lifting for their friendship in the beginning, but in my new version things are a lot more balanced between them right away.

I like to make it to where everything about their relationship seems really romantic from the outside, even though neither of them see it this way at all (Adair is even specifically aromantic.) It amuses me. I would say that nowadays my idea of their relationship is very QPP-like. That term doesn’t even exist yet when they become friends though…..lol

Submitted(+3)

ohh what's the (magical) setting like? it sounds heartwarming, lovely, and sweet despite various adolescent (?) difficulties and hardships and enjoying each other's company together. is adair accepted for their gender (presumably nonbinary?) but not well understood or respected for their aro-ness? is it fundamentally a tale of deep friendship? 

additionally, if DID/plurality is an important subject to you, these two new games of mine involve it (I have DID). 

https://swanchime.itch.io/alteraltar 

this one below is done in decker

https://swanchime.itch.io/uguisu

HostSubmitted(+2)

OOO nice ^_^ I will check these ones out!

Yea, most of the stories i write currently are about the characters in their high school years. Adair is at this point in the story’s timeline closeted nonbinary (AFAB). As for the aro thing, while not being understood for it quite as well by most people they know, they are definitely understood in this way by Ximun and a couple of their other shared friends.

I like to write about more intimate sorts of relationships that are non-traditional in nature. Mostly framed as very deep friendships, yes, such as in Adair and Ximun’s case, but also sometimes i like to write some alternate sorts of romances. So as a result Adair isnt even the only aspec character, I write a lot of them and a lot of different kinds of them. I would say Ximun also is aspec, though he primarily considers himself to be bi.

The magical setting involves everyone being born with magic blood types. So like instead of A, AB, O, etc. the blood types are magic and have special properties. Adair has the rarest one, which is astronomically more rare than all the others and makes them 1 in half a million. The magic in this setting is very weak however, I like to focus more on magic in more mundane everyday settings.

Submitted(+3)

oh nice! it's interesting to see how ur taking a very...gentle approach? to spreading awareness about that kind of thing in the nature of the positivity of difference, almost, rather than the extreme alienation / dehumanization of it (was thinking about the differences between how you work w/ the concept of "rare among rare" as something that's not, like, how i write about it, where one among a million only comes to be as a result of the extreme damnation of trauma (and that is how a genius (god) is born) (i write a lot about divinity where god is analogous to humans having god complexes / there is no difference) (a line in alteraltar and gentleman jack is "who is god but the first killer?")  and that conception of traumatic alienation creating "a godhood that should not exist / should never have existed" in that "being dehumanized can also create gods, not just monsters." 

those themes will also appear in the vn im making this time (STARTING TO WORK ON IT TODAY!!)

HostSubmitted (1 edit) (+1)

Hehe I do go for the alienation and dehumanization angle too. And how isolation especially can have such dire effects on the psyche. In the context of my own work, I think portraying the depths of misery that can come from being isolated by the scars of trauma just makes it feel way more special and important that the characters end up finding solace in each other’s company. I started writing to try to give myself hope in dark times, so I specifically wanted to show characters that have gone through (or even still go through) some pretty horrible stuff still managing to find their own happiness.

(edited to fix typo)

Submitted(+3)

I'm happy for you that writing about your hope in dark times has been therapeutic and healing for you. that's really great, and I'm glad you've made it out of the horrors enough to write about that special and important happiness. it sounds very meaningful to you

(+4)

My main character is an established one for me, Mixx the Jump Jockey who's shown up in some of my other work. Kind of an antisocial loner type, which fits with her chosen lifestyle of flying around space in a pretty small single-person craft. I think it's going to sort of be a "meets some people along the way" sort of structure, so other characters will emerge, but I'm not sure yet what they'll be like. I tend to like draw someone and then let their personality come forth out of that, I guess.

Submitted(+2)

aww the flying around space in a sintgle person craft sounds rly cute and fun. i hope she'll meet some interesting ppl along the way!!! i hope she has a fascinating and fun journey

Submitted(+2)

The perspective of my visual novel is from just a nameless stand-in for the reader that doesn't talk, and all the dialog will be characters speaking to you.

The character the plot revolves around won't be seen in the beginning, but he'll be built up in the story before you see him. He's this silly looking meat organ brain creature who might be named the Viscera Man but I don't know yet. He's kind of like a cryptid around a rural village, he became the Viscera Man like a month ago and has been hiding and is feared, but he's a nice little guy.

He's also gender of trans, and he's going through like a trans allegory. The game's going to be light-hearted but I need to make sure issues aren't undermined. Maybe it's just me but most visual novels and most queer stories have like normal human characters or at least close to that, which is fine of course, but I always preferred little creatures and weirdos, like a guy you'd see in a surreal Rpg Maker game but gay, so I'm making what I want to see.

Submitted(+2)

I think that's cool! that you're making a creature centered game about a guy that kinda looks weird but is actually p nice and cool. (viscera man sounds sick!) my characters "look mostly human" but inside aren't at all and "have no human values" and a lot of the narrative is about the tension of dehumanization / how a human being becomes smth less and more. 

but I think there need to be more games with weird looking creatures also. because I think there's a lot of boring character designs that are a bit like the vanilla flavor of character design. safe, good enough, but standard. happy to see ppl getting a little freaky. 

(+2)

my main character is named ben, mid-20s office worker going nowhere fast, always tired and feels empty

they find comfort in disassociating from their body and imagining they are just empty space in a void

due to this love of disassociating and doing it probably way too often, they feel doomed to never have themselves figured out and drift through life as a simple nothing of a person

but then something happens (their body gets mutated and transformed, transgender sorta things, and that'll be what the vn is about weeeeeeee)

Submitted(+3)

that sounds like a very honest and frank story with a lot of surrealism mixed in, v cool how it has very realistic kind of mundanity to it but with a twist!