This was very good. The voice over was really good. I bought the emotion, and not gonna lie, you hit me hard with that ending. Very well done. There is a bug with the mouse not disappearing. It would move to my other monitor, so that took me out of the experience a few times. Loved the story, the gameplay was engaging. Great work!
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My One Long Life's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| User Experience | #4 | 3.839 | 4.059 |
| Aesthetics | #7 | 4.117 | 4.353 |
| Overall | #8 | 3.747 | 3.961 |
| Usage of Theme | #19 | 3.283 | 3.471 |
Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Wow, the raw emotion in the narration really drives the mood and really sets the atmosphere, great work!
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Grove's LifeLoved the storytelling in this! Super ambitious to have all those different minigames, but it worked well! good job!
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Grove's LifeI kept having to re-do the portal section, I was almost a few seconds short. Is there a button to run faster? The What Remains of Editch Finch-like mix of storytelling and gameplay is very appealling, well done.
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Don't Look BackHmmm, it seems like somebody is cutting onions near me...
Wow, I never thought I could get so emotionally invested in a game that was made in a game jam! I really, REALLY wanted to catch that thief. And the ending is very poignant. I'm really impressed at how you put cutscenes and special animation sequences into the game - that's something I haven't done much of myself yet, so I'm astonished that you were able to do so much of it!
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Oh, No! Math!Very sad game :( it is amazing this was made in 48 hours, the animation and controls were amazing.
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Rule Of DungeonA sad game but nice. The controls and animations were good, though the thief was a little bit too fast (I was able to cut him off on corners though!).
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Be the best doggoWow, very ambitious to do your own voice overs and implement so many game mechanics in such a short time, you are very talented! I would have benefited from the controls being introduced, but I did manage to figure them out fairly quickly as they are at least standard controls. Be that as it may, I think this game has great potential if you want to work on it in the long run and polish it!
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Picky EatersThanks a lot for the feedback.. I wanted to add the "How to Play" section and more cutscenes/story into the game, but due to only 48 hours, I was not able to implement the lot of things. Moreover the guy, who I thought will do the voice over get sick so I had to do all the task alone..
I shouldn't have gone with such a long game with only 48 hours in hand lol:)
i liked the game its very emotive, but idk what part of the game is the "one rule" theme
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All 4-1 ruleBeautiful game! The thief is too fast though, it's a bit tricky to catch him. Props on the voice acting
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