Magic school adventure always gets my vote! Some really solid worldbuilding and character creation in here. Also, the design aesthetic and music make for a very immersive experience. One suggestion that I would make is to see how you can direct the flow of choices - I wanted to get to a moment of action, where the story truly starts and I kept having to choose who to talk and then those conversations led to errors. Like, I know that's a bug you can fix, but I wanted to know more about what I was getting into before talking to someone. But a really cool start! I would love to play this again once the bugs are fixed.
Thanks for the feedback! Definitely got a ways to go as I continue development!
The characters button gives a brief overview of each character, but I definitely plan to add more story for each of them. I haven't put it in yet, but I've also built the framework to include changing story text featuring different character actions.
Magic school adventure always gets my vote! Some really solid worldbuilding and character creation in here. Also, the design aesthetic and music make for a very immersive experience. One suggestion that I would make is to see how you can direct the flow of choices - I wanted to get to a moment of action, where the story truly starts and I kept having to choose who to talk and then those conversations led to errors. Like, I know that's a bug you can fix, but I wanted to know more about what I was getting into before talking to someone. But a really cool start! I would love to play this again once the bugs are fixed.
This was a fantastic entry that I enjoyed playing. I wish they're was a rating for sound, art and writing, because all three are quite excellent. There's a lot of reading in this game. So, It's not as meant for younger audiences. As a text based adventure, it succeeds in my book. More animation in the characters would make the game better, along with a few bug fixes. I got a lot of errors during conversations with other characters. In the audio department, an opportunity for improvement would be to add more audio feedback in the UI. Fantastic job overall!
Really lovely artwork and character designs! And very impressive scope given the short jam. I really appreciate the pronoun options and ability to choose your own name or opt for a given one if you're not creative enough
i really love these kinds of games , tysm for this cool game actually , also i actually faced a cannot read js error: Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'trip') but even though i am truly looking forward for any update + tysm
Thanks for the review! Where in the game did you encounter the error at? There are unfortunately some bugs blocking progression but once judging ends we'll have a build with fixes and more development done :)
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Magic school adventure always gets my vote! Some really solid worldbuilding and character creation in here. Also, the design aesthetic and music make for a very immersive experience. One suggestion that I would make is to see how you can direct the flow of choices - I wanted to get to a moment of action, where the story truly starts and I kept having to choose who to talk and then those conversations led to errors. Like, I know that's a bug you can fix, but I wanted to know more about what I was getting into before talking to someone. But a really cool start! I would love to play this again once the bugs are fixed.
Thanks for the feedback! Definitely got a ways to go as I continue development!
The characters button gives a brief overview of each character, but I definitely plan to add more story for each of them. I haven't put it in yet, but I've also built the framework to include changing story text featuring different character actions.
Magic school adventure always gets my vote! Some really solid worldbuilding and character creation in here. Also, the design aesthetic and music make for a very immersive experience. One suggestion that I would make is to see how you can direct the flow of choices - I wanted to get to a moment of action, where the story truly starts and I kept having to choose who to talk and then those conversations led to errors. Like, I know that's a bug you can fix, but I wanted to know more about what I was getting into before talking to someone. But a really cool start! I would love to play this again once the bugs are fixed.
This was a fantastic entry that I enjoyed playing. I wish they're was a rating for sound, art and writing, because all three are quite excellent. There's a lot of reading in this game. So, It's not as meant for younger audiences. As a text based adventure, it succeeds in my book. More animation in the characters would make the game better, along with a few bug fixes. I got a lot of errors during conversations with other characters. In the audio department, an opportunity for improvement would be to add more audio feedback in the UI. Fantastic job overall!
Thank you so much for the feedback! You've given us some good suggestions to use going forwards!
Can't play since only browser version. My browser is quirky.
Oh, thanks for letting me know! I'll upload a downloadable version in a few minutes.
Really lovely artwork and character designs! And very impressive scope given the short jam. I really appreciate the pronoun options and ability to choose your own name or opt for a given one if you're not creative enough
Thank you for the feedback!
Good job for crafting the story
But I saw this
Thank you for that bug! It's been fixed now!
i really love these kinds of games , tysm for this cool game actually , also i actually faced a cannot read js error: Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'trip') but even though i am truly looking forward for any update + tysm
Thanks for the review! Where in the game did you encounter the error at? There are unfortunately some bugs blocking progression but once judging ends we'll have a build with fixes and more development done :)