This is power stuff! When it all connected, I had to take a moment to process it. Good job, buddy! :)

It was chilling and impactful. Great work. 

And thank you for the message at the end.

I find it quite hard to find games that deal respectfully with the topic in hand, so I was happy to see the message in the end. There were many spelling mistakes, however, which derailed a bit of the vibe of the game. Aside the spellcheck, a more somber font would have also helped a bit. 

Overall it was an unsettling experience,, which I believe it was what you were aiming for. 

I found quite a few spelling mistakes. That aside, I feel like this game was a little to short to give you a lot of feedback. I really liked how you put that message at the end. You didn't have to, but you did. The game does have a creepy vibe to it, and your writing is very good. I feel with more options, dialog, and sound you could turn this into something really cool. Or even make something new. 

My favourite entry so far! I liked the twist.