The series is great, it just needs to be translated better but the writer is very talented! It's an easily fixed problem though and I got the general idea of things though it's better to be able to understand as close to 100% as possible. A few plotholes here and there and unrealized character development such as what happened to characters like Daisy or if Sora and Miles are forever going to live without recognizing each other. 

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Also the explanation for what Sora is and the lore behind it can be made clearer.

Overall, not bad for a first game/series with acknowledgment that they're not a native English speaker and should definitely try to work with someone to update the game for an improved translation and definitely looking forward to more from the creator!