I enjoyed it so far. I think there are things that can be improved. There are tilesets which the character should not be able to walk over but the character can in the game. Perhaps you can also check on the dialogue, there is a scene wherein Alenro is shouting and stopping Lyri to use a magic but the dialogue shows Alenro adressing Alenro.
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