Dominion of Darkness certainly has a lot of potential. The writing and atmosphere are very well done. The world seems unique. The concept of being the bad guy is fun.

This feels very much like an old school Choose Your Own Adventure novel, as the options are many and will have varying outcomes. Although, I suppose in tone it feels more like the Lone Wolf novels.

While it is AI Art (which I am not necessarily opposed to), it is pretty consistent in style, which I appreciate. I could have used more of it to flesh out the more patterned choices, but as it is more a Novel than Visual Novel, that could be a stylistic choice.