Blueballing the audience for hours and chickening out of every lewd interaction is the worst an AVN can do. Your story had potential, but if you present it like this, people will either skip through or just quit the game. You are wasting your story by refusing to give the reader the A part of the AVN and thus making them unreceptive for the story elements. 

I wonder who popularized the stupid idea that the MC can't have sex in the first half of the game. What is this, a disney fairy tale? Herbivore shonen censored for TV? There's writing a "slowburn", and there's writing a dud.  You did the latter. See, a slow burn requires something burning, a fire needs to be fed. You only have a cold fireplace that that failed to light because it starved out every spark it had. 

I got fed up with your BS before reaching any sex scene, and by now I don't even want to try even if it was three text boxes away. Which it isn't, you just chickened out again before dumping the next random AI-written story bit. Yes, we can tell. "Your sensors are right on the money, *em-dash* you're completely right" is like three AI flags in one damn textbox .