This was a cute story. It's a basic story about a sort of deadbeat loser getting direction in his life with the help of a cute wolf. The romance is sweet, Benji is great, and I do like the character development Seth goes through. The music's also pretty nice, being very much to my liking, as well as fitting with the scenes they're in. One problem I have with the VN is that it exposition dumps too much for my liking. A lot of things could have been either rewritten for the explanations to be unnecessary or at least broken up with banter to be more engaging. I also think the pacing is a bit off at certain points. I don't think those are major issues, but those did stick out to me. Overall, I enjoyed it. If the basic premise sounds interesting, consider giving this a read.
And since I never got a chance to rate this in the jam, here are the ratings:
Story: 4/5
Writing: 3/5
Presentation: 4/5
Theme: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
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