I wish you put more effort into this. From the description, I realize that this is an exercise just to get something out at all... and while I thought this was cute, I think it could've genuinely been pretty good if you had went into it with the mindset of "I want to make and finish something good" instead of "I want to get something shitty out." With that in mind, I think you should take the "THIS IS A SHITTY VN!!!" out of the description. If even you, the creator, aren't going to praise and recommend your work and call it shit, then who else will be interested in playing it? For future works, I would recommend on sentence formatting (with proper punctuation) and reviewing for typos. I hope you put something else out in the future. This was cute and I felt potential for something greater within it.