Interesting lore, i really liked that.

However, i think game needs some visual improvements. I do not usually play text based games WARSIM is the main one i have played , so i will use it as an example.

The pictures look good individually, but they do not fully match the rest of the game.

Overall, the presentation feels a little incomplete. The fonts and text colors also look too standard. Different text types could use different styles for example, player stats could have a different font and layout from story text style & color it`s hard to follow after few minutes.